In class we looked at an example of what would be a good built environment description would look like. The three that we looked at each had individual characteristics that separate themselves from the others.
The first used pictures to help portray the the colors that were inside the restaurant. The author used descriptive language as well to go along with the pictures. When alone either one is good but when together, they are great.
The second had a sound bit that was a recording of the daily sound one might hear if they were to visit the varsity restaurant. This gives an element that a reader has a sort of intangible to, kind of placing the reader in the middle of the restaurant.
The last was a personal outlook on the restaurant as a whole. The author ties in what was witnessed in the first two post and adds her own personal thoughts on how she feels about the restaurant. When I read the last post, I could reference the other two as to see why the author feels the way she does about the restaurant.